An intercepted message

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I sip my wine, and look around me. All the wise of our Brotherhood sit at my left and right. We are enjoying a festive meal. Music fills the room.

Suddenly, a group of men enters the room. Fighting men. They immediately dominate the room with their presence. I look up and recognize them as the top warriors of my personal regiment. There are eight. Seven I recognize. I see my trusted captain and six soldiers. The eight I have not seen before. He looks foreign. He also looks tied up.

The mean spread out. Two take position at the sides of the door. Four others escort the captive foreigner towards me, while my trusted captain proceeds in front of them.

Three paces away, he stops and salutes. I return the gesture of respect. I look at him, and give him a little nod. Invisible to most, but a clear sign to him that he can speak freely.

"Sire," he starts, "we have caught this man, who pretended to be a trader, while he was transporting secret communications".

At this, he pulls out a leather envelop and opens it. Inside, I see a number of documents. Again, I nod. This time, he recognizes it as permission to approach. He hands me the documents, which I read.

I already knew they had been planning something. Every Spartan knows they don't like our fine Brotherhood. But now, these documents, they are irrefutable evidence. They are indeed planning to invade.

"Execute that man", I order, "and get the Generals together. It is time to get to action".
 

Thrillology

Phrourach
Please write and publish a story taking place in the medieval age about this kind of stuff you talk about with your alliance... I'll love it! I am almost done with my current series of The Death Gate Cycle books, and this would be AWESOME.
 

DeletedUser

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That morning, I wake up. Something is different. I miss the sound of the marching recruits.

As I get dressed, a messenger comes in, asking me to please go to the Forum.

Inside, I see the Generals. Some are not even in complete uniform. The Commander sees me, approaches me and says: "It seems they found out we were on to them, they are sending their troops".

"Which ones this time", I ask.

"Cleopatre".

I smile. Finally the day has come. "Okay guys, you know what to do... start the diversion moves".

My Commander nods, in the way he always nods when he has already given the orders. That's what you get growing up together, in command, you become one. Both knowing what the other one is thinking. At times such as these, the value of such a bond shows itself in all its marvel.

We head to the walls, looking at our legions marching away, wishing we could have joined them...
 

Thrillology

Phrourach
What city-state are they in?
Wait... that was a stupid question...
Sparta.

Anyway, nice though. :)
 
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