Haiku Thread?

DeletedUser

Guest
an expression lost
unproductive time spent here
poetry is deaf

peace. Thanks for your haiku though it was quite nice Joris. I didn't check it for structure but it brought happy thoughts regardless
 

DeletedUser19042

Guest
Flameinducer said:
thats 6-8-7...
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No it's not?
nukedog said:
an expression lost
unproductive time spent here
poetry is deaf

peace. Thanks for your haiku though it was quite nice Joris. I didn't check it for structure but it brought happy thoughts regardless
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No problem. Will try an other one later on.

If someone tells me what the actual structure is ... 5-7-5 is correct, right?
 

DeletedUser40768

Guest
Gold is expensive
It makes people wonder why
they still play this game.

Sorry I couldn't help myself there :p
 

DeletedUser46838

Guest
Joseph Bond and I/
Spam the forums all day long/
No one gives a dang
 

DeletedUser40768

Guest
The forum is lame
Unless it has some spammers
To keep it alive

:p
 

DeletedUser5819

Guest
Joseph Bond Rocks Jor
Forum literature space
With haiku poems

(my first, is it right?)
 

DeletedUser5819

Guest
Read it like I'm right
So my poem scans metric
And achieves haiku
 

DeletedUser

Guest
Never has there been
A haiku thread with this much
failure and mistakes

Seriously, guys
Like half of the haikus here
aren't 5-7-5
 

DeletedUser8396

Guest
Skullyhoofd said:
Never has there been
A haiku thread with this much
failure and mistakes

Seriously, guys
Like half of the haikus here
aren't 5-7-5
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Wait, is not "aren't"
One syllable, and not two?
Isn't your line wrong?
 

DeletedUser49197

Guest
I say seven with 1 syllable, 'sven'. May just be bad english on my part... ;)
 
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