Haiku Thread?

DeletedUser

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Whoops, I have been caught.
Rhyming haikus' my weak spot,
Harder than I thought.

Fear not though my friend,
the wrong word has come to it's end.
Twas never my intend :(
 
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DeletedUser49197

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*appluad*

*Phew!*You got it right!
But, can you do it again?
Well, I do it right!
 

DeletedUser29066

Guest
Grepolis is addictive,
I have wasted many hours,
And yet I care not.
 

DeletedUser40768

Guest
That poem is all wrong
There are extra syllables
All over the place.
 

DeletedUser49197

Guest
Lets add that up:

Grepolis - 3
is - 1
Addictive - 3

3+3+1=7

1st Line: INCORRECT


I - 1
have - 1
wasted - 2
many - 2
hours - 2

1+1+2+2+2=8

Line 2: INCORRECT


And - 1
yet - 1
I - 1
care - 1
not - 1

1+1+1+1+1=5

Line 3: CORRECT

You got 1/3 (aka 33.3%, lower than an F-)
 

DeletedUser23986

Guest
how does it matter,
if the structure is faulty?
it is still a post !
 
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