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DeletedUser8396

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The psychological effects of being an abandoned kitten for 24 hours.
 
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DeletedUser29066

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The psychological effects of being a pebble for 24 hours.
 

Varun

Strategos
Abandoned Kitten:


The Kitten
I sit here and think of this topic,
That the pebble has finally gone psychotic,
The kitten who got abandoned it is,
I sit back and think of something witty

I am imagining myself as a kitten,
Lost, abandoned and all hope undone,
Her spirit is weak, her legs knobbly,
Listen to this poor kitten’s story

Mrrow, mrrow! I go on,
My legs are tired and all hope is gone,
I mewl and bawl all day long,
‘Where is my mistress?’, is my current song

Two-legs pass by the entire day,
Some pet me and bring me cheer,
I smell the fish somewhere,
I take it and eat is elsewhere

I go again to the green grass,
Sleepy and heady with my stomach’s mass,
But I cannot give up this morning’s pass,
To find my mistress whose kindness is vast

She took me in when I was cold,
She bathed me and took me into her fold,
She was mine and mine forever,
I am her pet, my conviction never wavers

‘I smell her scent!’, I mewl,
Excitement within me quavers,
I run to it bawling,
And find her equally mewling,

I run into her arms, her folding embrace,
Here is where I belong, my spirit ablaze,

I think this and arouse to type,
Hoping this you guys will like,
Do tell me if I got this right,
Please shoot pebble at sight

Sleep and Exams:

Sleep and Exams


Sleep, oh glorious sleep!
Why art thee make me weep?
Thy art a mindless heap,
Here is why I call you a creep

Thy rest me, energize me,
Thy hold me, enfold me,
Thy meld me, reshape me,
Thy refresh me and I thank thee

But thou hast learn timing,
Thou embrace me when I should study,
But no! Thou hast evil,
Thou make my head noddy

I wake up in the morning,
I find the work shoddy,
I drooled over my body,
And thou aren’t even sorry

But exams approach,
I hast write a paper tomorrow,
But thou hast evil in you,
Thou has removed me from you

Thou put me to sleep when I least need,
Thou wake me when I need the most,
Thou need to take some notes,
About how within me thou should host
 

DeletedUser8396

Guest
Abandoned Kitten:


The Kitten
I sit here and think of this topic,
That the pebble has finally gone psychotic,
The kitten who got abandoned it is,
I sit back and think of something witty

I am imagining myself as a kitten,
Lost, abandoned and all hope undone,
Her spirit is weak, her legs knobbly,
Listen to this poor kitten’s story

Mrrow, mrrow! I go on,
My legs are tired and all hope is gone,
I mewl and bawl all day long,
‘Where is my mistress?’, is my current song

Two-legs pass by the entire day,
Some pet me and bring me cheer,
I smell the fish somewhere,
I take it and eat is elsewhere

I go again to the green grass,
Sleepy and heady with my stomach’s mass,
But I cannot give up this morning’s pass,
To find my mistress whose kindness is vast

She took me in when I was cold,
She bathed me and took me into her fold,
She was mine and mine forever,
I am her pet, my conviction never wavers

‘I smell her scent!’, I mewl,
Excitement within me quavers,
I run to it bawling,
And find her equally mewling,

I run into her arms, her folding embrace,
Here is where I belong, my spirit ablaze,

I think this and arouse to type,
Hoping this you guys will like,
Do tell me if I got this right,
Please shoot pebble at sight

Sleep and Exams:

Sleep and Exams


Sleep, oh glorious sleep!
Why art thee make me weep?
Thy art a mindless heap,
Here is why I call you a creep

Thy rest me, energize me,
Thy hold me, enfold me,
Thy meld me, reshape me,
Thy refresh me and I thank thee

But thou hast learn timing,
Thou embrace me when I should study,
But no! Thou hast evil,
Thou make my head noddy

I wake up in the morning,
I find the work shoddy,
I drooled over my body,
And thou aren’t even sorry

But exams approach,
I hast write a paper tomorrow,
But thou hast evil in you,
Thou has removed me from you

Thou put me to sleep when I least need,
Thou wake me when I need the most,
Thou need to take some notes,
About how within me thou should host

Read the sleep one. I lol'd hehe. It's pretty great :D Only thing is some misuse of the archaic language (hast, art, etc). Easy changes.
 

DeletedUser29066

Guest
Nice job Varun.

By the way, y'all know what we call kittens in this part of the country? Coyote Bait :D
 

DeletedUser

Guest
Congrats Varun and well deserved. Hey ~ while Hassan is out their howlin at the moon you just stay in and make sure you get yer revision done .;)
 
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