The Pebble Poem Collection

DeletedUser

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Normally I read rhyming poems. I always give rhyming poems an alright rating. When it comes to a poem that doesn't rhyme I hope for, what I call, an emotional stir within myself. When that doesn't happen it tells me the poem is flat, lacking. It's either that or I just failed to connect, to 'relate', as you might say. Is this making sense?

Just my opinion, nothing personal.
 

DeletedUser8396

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Shadis said:
Normally I read rhyming poems. I always give rhyming poems an alright rating. When it comes to a poem that doesn't rhyme I hope for, what I call, an emotional stir within myself. When that doesn't happen it tells me the poem is flat, lacking. It's either that or I just failed to connect, to 'relate', as you might say. Is this making sense?

Just my opinion, nothing personal.
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Nothing personal taken. Not all poetry (or sentences with strategically placed line breaks like this) relates to people, which is perfectly understandable. I like and appreciate honesty, which you have given.
 

DeletedUser32498

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Lol. I agree with Shadis. Like no ryhme, no rhythm, etc... But I like the ideas you come up with. Just the structure is lacking. But good work. ;)
 

DeletedUser

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Ah well I enjoy a poem I can relate to or a poem that blows you away. Lord knows I couldn't have written this. I don't think many people could put the effort into it. That alone is an achievement. You've got 'the stuff' Apebble. Keep on writing brother.

*sniffles* It breaks my heart to criticize you. :(
 

DeletedUser8396

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Shadis said:
Ah well I enjoy a poem I can relate to or a poem that blows you away. Lord knows I couldn't have written this. I don't think many people could put the effort into it. That alone is an achievement. You've got 'the stuff' Apebble. Keep on writing brother.

*sniffles* It breaks my heart to criticize you. :(
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Hey, not everything I spit out is pure gold, and I don't expect it to. That is why I ask for honesty. I don't want people to see my (c-word that means poop) and call it candy just so I feel bubbly inside. You have given more than I could ever ask for: honesty.
 

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a pebble said:
Hey, not everything I spit out is pure gold, and I don't expect it to. That is why I ask for honesty. I don't want people to see my (c-word that means poop) and call it candy just so I feel bubbly inside. You have given more than I could ever ask for: honesty.
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Bubbles :p



*cough* Anyways, on a side note, I tend to be generally easy-going, sarcastic, etc. but when I want to be serious you can be as sure as hell that I will be. As it takes awhile for me to build respect for someone. But I respect you Apebble. I've seen some of your work and its great.
 

DeletedUser8396

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Shadis said:
Bubbles :p



*cough* Anyways, on a side note, I tend to be generally easy-going, sarcastic, etc. but when I want to be serious you can be as sure as hell that I will be. As it takes awhile for me to build respect for someone. But I respect you Apebble. I've seen some of your work and its great.
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Duly noted, and thanks :)

You should write a poem about this moment Shady :p

Wouldn't we all like a Shadis poem? YEEAAA!!!

*chants Shadis repeatedly*
 

DeletedUser

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There was a time
When I saved a dime
But that times not now
No sir not by a cow
This time I say
It's time to lay
Down that dime
This very time
To use this dime
Oh just this time
To save this moment
This very sweet moment
Of Apebble and I

Five second poem yippee....
 

DeletedUser8396

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Shadis said:
There was a time
When I saved a dime
But that times not now
No sir not by a cow
This time I say
It's time to lay
Down that dime
This very time
To use this dime
Oh just this time
To save this moment
This very sweet moment
Of Apebble and I

Five second poem yippee....
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I think a tear slipped out :(

lol

But, nevertheless, I am tired :p

Goodnight all. I shall see you tomorrow.
 
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